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Is (B) wrong because it talks about social vision in literature in general, and therefore is too broad in scope?
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demetri.blaisdell Wrote:Good question and a good answer. I think lines 37-40 are the best evidence for why (B) is wrong. It also supports (D). Basically, the critics wouldn't criticize not having a plan or roadmap unless they wanted one. We don't know that including one would be enough to satisfy them but this is a reasonable inference.
The other wrong answers aren't too tempting:
(A) is contradicted. In lines 41-43, Mphahlele rejects the biography/fiction dichotomy.
(C) is unsupported. I guess if it were in the passage, it would be somewhere in the first paragraph. But it isn't, so (C) is wrong.
(E) is unsupported. The critics might think this but the author is defending Mphahlele's blending of styles.
I hope this extra explanation helps. You two seem to have it pretty well under control but let me know if you have any further questions.
Demetri
demetri.blaisdell Wrote:Good question and a good answer. I think lines 37-40 are the best evidence for why (B) is wrong. It also supports (D). Basically, the critics wouldn't criticize not having a plan or roadmap unless they wanted one. We don't know that including one would be enough to satisfy them but this is a reasonable inference.
The other wrong answers aren't too tempting:
(A) is contradicted. In lines 41-43, Mphahlele rejects the biography/fiction dichotomy.
(C) is unsupported. I guess if it were in the passage, it would be somewhere in the first paragraph. But it isn't, so (C) is wrong.
(E) is unsupported. The critics might think this but the author is defending Mphahlele's blending of styles.
I hope this extra explanation helps. You two seem to have it pretty well under control but let me know if you have any further questions.
Demetri
ohthatpatrick Wrote:Good questions.
It's fair for us to use "social vision" and "vision for the future" interchangeably, I think.
In line 33, the passage refers to Mphahlele's "social vision". When line 37 (the next sentence) brings up his "vision of the future", it's safe to assume we're still talking about the same thing, especially given that Mphahlele's focus on "the social message he advances" (line 17) is reinforced throughout the passage. It's fair to think that his vision for the future includes his social vision/message.
It's great that you're examining the disparity between passage language and answer choice language, but be careful about being TOO picky. The answer choice won't always give us verbatim re-phrases of details from the passage, so we'll sometimes have to live with very close synonyms.
In terms of your "author vs. critics" question, you would be safer going with the author's point of view if you're trying to justify an opinion . If you're trying to justify a fact, then you'll have to find a fact in the passage to support it. If you're trying to support an opinion ("based on the passage"), you would want to hear "the passage's opinion", which is the author's.
More than anything, we can just eliminate (B) because 'irrelevant' is way too extreme of an idea. There is no line reference in the passage that would support that certain critics find the social vision contained in a work irrelevant .
Q7 is an Inference question, testing us on some specific line reference. For those types of questions, it behooves us to be very wary of the extreme terms in any answer and to not pick an answer with an extreme term unless we can find a correspondingly strong term in the passage to support it.
Hope this helps.