You're understanding of this one is about the same as I would have if I encountered it on a test. i'd know that answer choice (C) didn't seem necessary, but I wouldn't pause long enough to find out why. That said, in review, it's always good to go back and look a bit deeper.
The issue with answer choice (C) is that it's too precise. The argument concludes that controlling the temperature of the chemical reactions in the brain is a factor in the development of intelligence, but the argument never concludes, suggests, or assumes that it's an essential element of developing intelligence. Beware of answer choices that are too strong on Necessary Assumption questions. Answer choice (C) says that controlling the temperature of the chemical reactions is necessary to developing intelligence, and while the argument concludes that it's a factor in developing intelligence, it never suggests that it's necessary.
Notice how answer choice (D) is presented in much weaker language. It says that the development of intelligence is not independent of the chemical reactions in the brains, but this doesn't say what the relationship is, just that a relationship exists.
So answer choice (C) says precisely what the relationship is, while answer choice (D) simply says that a relationship exists. Which one is necessary? The exact relationship outlined in answer choice (C) need not be true, but that a relationship exists between intelligence and chemical reactions in the brain as outlined in answer choice (D) does.
Let's look at the incorrect answers:
(A) is true, at least according to my understanding of the world, but that doesn't make it the correct answer. This does not connect the temperature of chemical reactions with the development of the brain or intelligence.
(B) need not be true. While the conclusion may be about mammals, that does not restrict intelligence to only mammals.
(C) represents a connection between the right ideas but does so too precisely. Even if mammals whose brains are subject to uncontrolled temperature swings could develop intelligence, this would not undermine the conclusion that controlling such temperatures is a factor in the development of the brain and intelligence.
(E) represents a negation of information in the evidence, but not the gap between the evidence and the conclusion. Relevant? Yes. Necessary? No.
Hope that helps!
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