by bbirdwell Sat Apr 16, 2011 3:27 pm
Here's what the original says:
To write a good novel, first, think about the crime, then come up with the things you need to get there (circumstances and clues).
(A) starts off as a good match, but then goes into la-la land with the whole "most of us..." part.
(B) seems like a decent match at first. We might leave this one til later and then come back to it. When we do that, we'll see that (E) is a better match. (B) seems to actually be the opposite of what the original says. To be a better match, I think it'd have to say "decide which veggies you want, then prepare the soil accordingly." First, there's a decision to be made, and then circumstances created.
(C) is not even close.
(D) is not even close.
(E) is a good match! Make a decision (where you want the shot to do), then create the circumstances to get there (get in position). Just like the original, start with an idea of where you are going, then prepare the way.
Does that help?