You've definitely made (B) better by removing the "many" and implying that ALL high tech systems require high school grads.
However, the problem with (B) remains this: what percentage of armed services individuals actually operate the high tech systems?
If you picture a real armed service, there are obviously some people manning the radar screens, flying drones, etc. But aren't they vastly outnumbered by the soldiers who AREN'T sitting in front of a screen?
I would imagine that in our actual Army/Navy/Marines, etc., 20% or less of the soldiers are actually responsible for operating high-tech systems.
So even though the army would need high school grads to fill THOSE roles, the majority of soldiers would NOT need a high school education.
You may be thinking, "Patrick, you seem to be pulling in outside knowledge and/or pulling 20% out of your butt."
You are correct.
But doing so protects me from caring too much about these high-tech systems. I don't have any idea how significant these high-tech systems are to the armed services in this stimulus. The jobs that (B) refers to might be a significant percentage of armed service jobs or a very negligible percentage.
Don't get me wrong: (B)
does currently weaken the argument a smidge, and it would weaken the argument a slightly bigger smidge if we changed 'many' to 'all'.
We know from (B) that "at least SOME positions in the army cannot be filled by high school dropouts". But that's just not a very powerful weakening idea.
If (B) said something like "most positions in the armed services involve operating high-tech systems that can only be performed by those who have completed high school", then it would have much more teeth.
(C) is a much more powerful weakener because it's basically just supplying an alternative explanation for the percentage uptick.
The author thinks that the uptick in high school dropouts explains the uptick in armed service recruits.
(B) attempts to slightly undermine the plausibility of the author's explanation
(C) provides an alternative explanation for the statistic
Both of those can be valid attack points, but you should know that LSAT
vastly leans towards rewarding the alternative explanation.
When I read this stimulus, I go to the answer choices with this question in mind:
"Given that I don't want to agree with the author's hypothesis that high school dropouts are the ones causing the uptick in recruits,
what else could be causing the uptick in recruits?"
(C) is a weirdly direct answer because it basically just says, "it's high school grads".