I think the "even" is unnecessary. To me it adds some subtle emphasis that I don't think we need.
It's definitely not the easiest sentence to negate, but remember, you can ALWAYS negate something by simply prefacing it with "it is not true that ____"
So:
It is NOT true that
People express themselves more cautiously when something important is at stake. If I were trying to paraphrase what that means, I might just say "People don't necessarily express themselves more cautiously when something important is at stake".
Maybe they do, maybe they don't.
The original statement is technically a conditional, because "when" is a sufficient trigger.
So you COULD diagram the original statement as:
Something important at stake --> ppl express themselves more cautiously
When you want to negate a conditional, it's normally easiest to just use the "it is not true that" prefix.
You do NOT want to try negating either the sufficient or the necessary condition.
Instead, you're simply saying that no such conditional relationship exists. So when the sufficient idea happens, the necessary idea may or may not happen.
When something important is at stake, people may or may not express themselves more cautiously.
Let me know if that didn't make sense.