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p_gorsky
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Word Usage

by p_gorsky Fri Oct 25, 2013 12:44 pm

I was wondering if the words precipitous and pernicious are used correctly in this sentence.

My precipitous decision to get into a relationship with Henry resulted in a pernicious heartbreak.

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Re: Word Usage

by tommywallach Wed Oct 30, 2013 1:12 pm

Hey Gorsky,

Well, these sentences don't really tell me what you think the words mean, but I'll do my best. "Precipitous" means "hasty" (in the way you seem to be using it) and "pernicious" means harmful. It's not a great work to describe a heartbreak, which isn't really "pernicious" by definition. You'd need to describe how it actually did damage (beyond being kinda sad) to use that word.

Hope that helps!

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Re: Word Usage

by tommywallach Wed Oct 30, 2013 1:13 pm

Just to be clear, "precipitous" looks good, "pernicious" is a little off.

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Re: Word Usage

by p_gorsky Mon Nov 04, 2013 1:20 am

That's what I thought. Thanks!
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Re: Word Usage

by tommywallach Mon Nov 04, 2013 2:43 pm

Glad to help!

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