by tommywallach Mon Jan 06, 2014 1:19 am
Hey Kwame,
Sorry, but I'd need to see a real example as you'd actually use it. This as written is not very good. With such a broad prompt like this, where you could talk about ANYTHING, why talk about fiction? Use your life. Use history. Use current events. Again, I'm not saying it isn't possible to use this stuff. But I am saying that it's tough, and needs to be very specific and very applicable to the prompt as it's given. This example you're giving, because it's so vague, definitely doesn't feel like a good choice! I'd say it's safer to stick with the real world.
-t