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Analytical essay- issue

by venkatsubramaniam1212 Thu Sep 03, 2015 12:17 am

Topic:
People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
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Essay:
The above states that the people who makes decisions based on emotions and justify those with logic are poor decision makers according to my perspective the above issue states the fact which is true why because the decision making an immanent quality which every one posses. The decision made by them is judged good or bad depending up on the way they make the decision and the factors which they consider for taking decisions. From my own experience and the few happening in my ambient thought me that a good decisions should not consider the factor of emotion and in the further passage i would like the opposition stands.
Decision making is an important quality all the human beings on the earth posses few person are affected by the factor of emotion when they take the decision which will mislead them while taking the decision. This is suitable for any circumstances for example: if a judge in the court who has plays an important role for judging the people depending n the crime they do the decision made by him should be wise, in case if he involves the emotion in his decision think how it will be all the persons who commit the crime will use their emotions to vindicate from the blame. The above example proves that if the judge makes the decisions based on the emotions of the perpetrates even he has a logical reason for it they decision made by him will be poor.
Similarly decisions are based on entirely based on logic a small factor of common sense and a factor of possibility should considered. I would like to illustrate the above with a small example which i have experienced. When i was organizing my department symposium we planned to collect a sum of 500 rupees from each students this was my initial decision made by me regarding the finance part. Later i came to knew that few students from the poor background were not able to pay this sum so i decided to make a reduction for them. When this reduction is announced every one in the class stated to rise their financial problems regarding the payment when planned logically the entire sum is not required to make the function to a grand success a reduction in the amount will also make the function a
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Re: Analytical essay- issue

by tommywallach Thu Sep 10, 2015 5:30 pm

As mentioned at the top of this thread, we don't provide feedback on essays.