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Subject identification..General query

by GA Wed Jan 09, 2008 5:46 am

In india, As a result of massacre and destruction of the gumbad at Ram Temple,the largest in the world.

Here in this sentence, the adjective phrase " the largest monument in the world" is modifying "massacre and destruction", "gumbad" or "Ram temple".

Please note that this sentence has no connection with any of SC question sources.

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by StaceyKoprince Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:40 pm

This is not a complete sentence - there's no verb. So I can't really advise you! Try writing another sentence.
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by Guest Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:44 am

Here goes the complete sentence
In india, As a result of massacre and destruction of the gumbad at Ram Temple,the largest in the world. the artists lost the various sculputures,built in A.D 1356.
Here in this sentence, the adjective phrase " the largest monument in the world" is modifying "massacre and destruction", "gumbad" or "Ram temple".

Please clarify
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by RonPurewal Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:54 pm

a gumbad is one of those big dome thingies, right?

i would say it's ambiguous, and could potentially refer to either 'gumbad' or 'Ram Temple'. this is a huge point of contention, though; you can get some scope of our extant discussion on this topic at this thread.

also, i'm assuming you meant to write a comma, not a period, after 'world'.

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if you want to clear up the ambiguity, adjust the modifier so that it's clear. for instance:
- if you mean the gumbad, write '...of the gumbad at Ram Temple, the largest gumbad in the world'
- if you mean the temple, write '...of the gumbad at Ram Temple, the largest temple in the world'

i don't think the modifier could refer to massacre & destruction, as 'largest in the world' doesn't seem an appropriate phrase for an historical event. if you wanted to modify those words, you'd say something like '...the largest in world history' instead.
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by Guest Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:13 am

RPurewal Wrote:a gumbad is one of those big dome thingies, right?

i would say it's ambiguous, and could potentially refer to either 'gumbad' or 'Ram Temple'. this is a huge point of contention, though; you can get some scope of our extant discussion on this topic at this thread.

also, i'm assuming you meant to write a comma, not a period, after 'world'.

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if you want to clear up the ambiguity, adjust the modifier so that it's clear. for instance:
- if you mean the gumbad, write '...of the gumbad at Ram Temple, the largest gumbad in the world'
- if you mean the temple, write '...of the gumbad at Ram Temple, the largest temple in the world'

i don't think the modifier could refer to massacre & destruction, as 'largest in the world' doesn't seem an appropriate phrase for an historical event. if you wanted to modify those words, you'd say something like '...the largest in world history' instead.















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