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so/because + punctuation

by Milkshake99 Sat Oct 20, 2012 8:04 pm

In the SC book:
wrong: she gave money so the school could offer scholorships.
right: Plants grow because the sun shines.

S V so S V(=result)
this form is incorrect?

Can someone confirm? I am confused
thanks!
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Re: so/because + punctuation

by Willy Sun Oct 21, 2012 5:12 am

Milkshake99 Wrote:In the SC book:
wrong: she gave money so the school could offer scholorships.
right: Plants grow because the sun shines.

S V so S V(=result)
this form is incorrect?

Can someone confirm? I am confused
thanks!


The correct version of sentence 1 would be

she gave money so THAT the school could offer scholarships.
we need to convey the PURPOSE here i.e. why she gave money.

Correct forms of "SO" are

SO X THAT Y (Y explains X)
SO THAT (convey the "purpose")
SO LONG AS (means "provided that")
SO TOO (means "as well")

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Re: so/because + punctuation

by Milkshake99 Sun Oct 21, 2012 4:33 pm

thanks.
but how about the use of a single so for result?

is this sentence correct? ->The shops were closed so I didn't get any milk.

do we need a comma before "closed"?
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Re: so/because + punctuation

by Willy Mon Oct 22, 2012 5:48 am

Milkshake99 Wrote:thanks.
but how about the use of a single so for result?

is this sentence correct? ->The shops were closed so I didn't get any milk.

do we need a comma before "closed"?


I think you are right, yes, we need a COMMA after SO in this sentence to make it right. We are connecting 2 independent clauses here with only SO. This construction is not right on GMAT.

Remember COMMA + FANBOYS construction to connect 2 independent clauses.
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Re: so/because + punctuation

by Milkshake99 Mon Oct 22, 2012 5:41 pm

willigetmylifeback Wrote:
Milkshake99 Wrote:thanks.
but how about the use of a single so for result?

is this sentence correct? ->The shops were closed so I didn't get any milk.

do we need a comma before "closed"?


I think you are right, yes, we need a COMMA after SO in this sentence to make it right. We are connecting 2 independent clauses here with only SO. This construction is not right on GMAT.

Remember COMMA + FANBOYS construction to connect 2 independent clauses.


i think i understand now..

i confuse "so" with "because".

"because" is not FANBOYS, coordinating conjunction.

subordinators can connect sentences without comma.

Thanks!!
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Re: so/because + punctuation

by Willy Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:22 am

Milkshake99 Wrote:
willigetmylifeback Wrote:
Milkshake99 Wrote:thanks.
but how about the use of a single so for result?

is this sentence correct? ->The shops were closed so I didn't get any milk.

do we need a comma before "closed"?


I think you are right, yes, we need a COMMA after SO in this sentence to make it right. We are connecting 2 independent clauses here with only SO. This construction is not right on GMAT.

Remember COMMA + FANBOYS construction to connect 2 independent clauses.


i think i understand now..

i confuse "so" with "because".

"because" is not FANBOYS, coordinating conjunction.

subordinators can connect sentences without comma.

Thanks!!


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Re: so/because + punctuation

by tim Thu Oct 25, 2012 1:41 am

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