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MGMAT SC question about modifiers

by amateur Mon Mar 25, 2013 10:41 pm

Page 70; Pronouns section say that
it, they and other personal pronouns are used to mean the same actual thing as the antecedant.
ex:
The money spent by her parents is more than it was expected to be.

that, those are used to create a copy of the antecedant.
ex:
The money spent by her parents is less than that spent by her children.
Her goods are low quality than those of her competitors.

Agreed and clear!

Moving to page 97, modifiers section
The acquaintances whom we like most are those who flatter us best.

Here we are trying to talk about the same group of acquaintances (antecedant). So why are we using those instead of they? Using those is creating a new set of acquaintances who are not the same (can be other acquaintances who are our neighbors, not necessarily the ones whom we like)!

I agree that by using those, the sentence is more pleasing to the ear than using they. But remember the very first rule of GMAT preparation is not to believe in your ear. So can someone clear me about this topic? Thank You
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Re: MGMAT SC question about modifiers

by tim Tue Mar 26, 2013 10:03 am

we are dealing with two distinctly different linguistic constructs: "acquaintances whom we like most" and "acquaintances who flatter us best". just because the end result of the sentence is to claim that these two sets are congruent, it does not change the fact that linguistically we are dealing with two different things..
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Re: MGMAT SC question about modifiers

by geenaojoseph Thu Jul 11, 2013 8:51 am

amateur Wrote:Page 70; Pronouns section say that
it, they and other personal pronouns are used to mean the same actual thing as the antecedant.
ex:
The money spent by her parents is more than it was expected to be.

that, those are used to create a copy of the antecedant.
ex:
The money spent by her parents is less than that spent by her children.
Her goods are low quality than those of her competitors.

Agreed and clear!

Moving to page 97, modifiers section
The acquaintances whom we like most are those who flatter us best.

Here we are trying to talk about the same group of acquaintances (antecedant). So why are we using those instead of they? Using those is creating a new set of acquaintances who are not the same (can be other acquaintances who are our neighbors, not necessarily the ones whom we like)!

I agree that by using those, the sentence is more pleasing to the ear than using they. But remember the very first rule of GMAT preparation is not to believe in your ear. So can someone clear me about this topic? Thank You



Could be because in the sentence "acquaintances" is the object of sentence and needs to be referred to with a demonstrative pronoun(and not a subject pronoun like
they
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Re: MGMAT SC question about modifiers

by tim Mon Jul 15, 2013 8:07 am

:)
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