Verbal question you found somewhere else? General issue with idioms or grammar? Random verbal question? These questions belong here.
krutiks511
Students
 
Posts: 10
Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2015 9:01 am
 

GMAT SC-rhetorical construction.

by krutiks511 Thu Sep 10, 2015 5:36 am

[redacted]
Chelsey Cooley
Forum Guests
 
Posts: 107
Joined: Wed Jan 08, 2014 10:49 am
 

Re: GMAT SC-rhetorical construction.

by Chelsey Cooley Sat Sep 12, 2015 12:53 am

The "touch rule" for modifiers that begin with wh words (like "who") is one of those rules that works brilliantly 90% of the time and can be very powerful, but isn't an absolute law. (Kind of like the rule in Quant that says you can always solve for two variables if you have two equations - it works really well, right up until you run into a DS problem that's been specifically designed to exploit it.)

Luckily, the exceptions are pretty easy to spot. The GMAT considers it okay to have a single, very short modifier - which will almost always, in my experience, be a prepositional phrase modifier - between a noun and a 'wh' modifier, as long as the meaning is completely clear. Thus, this is okay:

The portrait of the Queen, which used to hang on my wall, was stolen yesterday.

And so is your example.
RonPurewal
Students
 
Posts: 19744
Joined: Tue Aug 14, 2007 8:23 am
 

Re: GMAT SC-rhetorical construction.

by RonPurewal Mon Sep 14, 2015 11:04 am

OG problems may not be posted here.

please read the forum rules. thank you.
tim
Course Students
 
Posts: 5665
Joined: Tue Sep 11, 2007 9:08 am
Location: Southwest Airlines, seat 21C
 

Re: GMAT SC-rhetorical construction.

by tim Tue Sep 22, 2015 11:07 am

krutiks511, it looks like you may have been wondering about "wh-" modifiers. There is a pretty hard and fast rule for dealing with this sort of situation, with no exceptions that I am aware of. Do a search on the forum for posts Ron or I wrote with the words "closest eligible noun", and you'll see how to deal with "wh-" modifiers that follow a comma.
Tim Sanders
Manhattan GMAT Instructor

Follow this link for some important tips to get the most out of your forum experience:
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/a-few-tips-t31405.html