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Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by gmater08 Wed Feb 11, 2009 3:26 pm

Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months that ended in September, slightly less than they did in the year that ended in the previous quarter.

(A) less than they did
(B) less than it did
(C) less than they were
(D) lower than
(E) lower than they were

Is "Employment costs" a countable/uncountable item.

How to select between option "A" and "C"

Thanks
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by gmater08 Thu Feb 12, 2009 3:31 am

In my view "employment costs" is uncountable, I am still seeking intructors's explanations :)
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by nafs_r Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:50 am

i think employment costs is a countable..i will go with choice E.
what's the answer?
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by esledge Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:00 pm

Although I don't think it is the relevant issue in this one, "employment costs" might be either countable or uncountable, depending on the context. You could count the various components (employment costs = hiring + training + salary + benefits + etc.). On the other hand, you could lump all of these costs into one amount, which would be uncountable.

Uncountable is probably the intended meaning here, as it says the costs "rose" not "increased in number."

Either "less" or "lower" could work with an uncountable quantity, so what do we really need to know about these words?
--"less" is a comparative that means "smaller in size, amount, degree, etc."
--"lower" is a comparative that is the opposite of higher.

I think the relevant amount is not the "employment costs" but the percent by which the costs rose. I think "less than" more clearly conveys the idea that employment costs rose 2.8% in the year ending in September, while employment costs rose <2.8% in the year ending in June.

If you wanted to use "lower than" correctly, you would need a noun in the second part of the comparison (e.g. "2.8% is lower than the percent for last quarter). Both (D) and (E) can be eliminated on this basis. (D) has no noun in the second part of the comparison. (E) has "they" = costs, which is the wrong noun, in the second part of the comparison.

gmater08 Wrote:How to select between option "A" and "C"

The only difference between (A) and (C) is the verb. Consider parallelism with the other verbs that share the subject.

(A) Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in ..., slightly less than they (employment costs) did in ...
(C) Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in ..., slightly less than they (employment costs) were in ...

The active verb "rose" parallels the active "did." There's a name for this: proform. Basically, "did" replaces "rose" in much the same way that a pronoun might replace a noun. It is understood that "did" = "rose."

You've probably heard something like this in speech: "Did you say the sun rose already?" "Yes, it did." (same idea: it = the sun, did = rose). "Yes, it were" is an incorrect response.
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by huiyongw412 Fri Oct 21, 2011 9:12 am

To esledge:

I think that whether "employment costs" is countable or not does matter. Since if the term were uncountable, I'd have a reason to choose B over A because B uses "it" rather than "they" to refer to "employment costs", right?

If not, can I conclude that both "it" and "they" can refer to an uncountable noun? And how can we distinguish between A and B?

I'm really confused here
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by RonPurewal Wed Nov 09, 2011 4:56 am

huiyongw412 Wrote:To esledge:

I think that whether "employment costs" is countable or not does matter. Since if the term were uncountable, I'd have a reason to choose B over A because B uses "it" rather than "they" to refer to "employment costs", right?

If not, can I conclude that both "it" and "they" can refer to an uncountable noun?


yeah, some uncountable nouns are plural. for instance, "taxes" is a plural noun, but the concept that it represents is uncountable (taxes are not things that you can separate into one, two, three,...)
so, you would say my taxes are less than they were last year, not [i]my taxes are fewer than they were last year[i].

And how can we distinguish between A and B?


there's no arguing with the fact that "costs" is a plural noun, so (b) is wrong.
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by jp.jprasanna Mon Jan 23, 2012 5:29 pm

esledge Wrote:Although I don't think it is the relevant issue in this one, "employment costs" might be either countable or uncountable, depending on the context. You could count the various components (employment costs = hiring + training + salary + benefits + etc.). On the other hand, you could lump all of these costs into one amount, which would be uncountable.

Uncountable is probably the intended meaning here, as it says the costs "rose" not "increased in number."

Either "less" or "lower" could work with an uncountable quantity, so what do we really need to know about these words?
--"less" is a comparative that means "smaller in size, amount, degree, etc."
--"lower" is a comparative that is the opposite of higher.

I think the relevant amount is not the "employment costs" but the percent by which the costs rose. I think "less than" more clearly conveys the idea that employment costs rose 2.8% in the year ending in September, while employment costs rose <2.8% in the year ending in June.

If you wanted to use "lower than" correctly, you would need a noun in the second part of the comparison (e.g. "2.8% is lower than the percent for last quarter). Both (D) and (E) can be eliminated on this basis. (D) has no noun in the second part of the comparison. (E) has "they" = costs, which is the wrong noun, in the second part of the comparison.

gmater08 Wrote:How to select between option "A" and "C"

The only difference between (A) and (C) is the verb. Consider parallelism with the other verbs that share the subject.

(A) Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in ..., slightly less than they (employment costs) did in ...
(C) Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in ..., slightly less than they (employment costs) were in ...




Ohhh thanks a lot for detailing this out.. these questions have always been a pain!

so the take away...

If we want to use "lower than" we need 2 countable nouns on both the sides, so are the below correct?

Example : The money that we won last game is lower than that (money) of the previous.
The money that we won is last game is 12£ slightly less than the previous game.

esledge Wrote:The active verb "rose" parallels the active "did." There's a name for this: proform. Basically, "did" replaces "rose" in much the same way that a pronoun might replace a noun. It is understood that "did" = "rose."

You've probably heard something like this in speech: "Did you say the sun rose already?" "Yes, it did." (same idea: it = the sun, did = rose). "Yes, it were" is an incorrect response.



Option A " Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months that ended in September, slightly less than they DIDin the year that ended in the previous quarter.

So to take things literally how can money do anything? A company can do something about it!

Example A company took in more overseas projects, so that taxes rose slightly more than they [b]were [/b]last year.

Could you please explain little more in detail how to eliminate C and select A... I selected C thinking costs cant do anything by itself. Please help. Thanks in anticipation..

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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by thanghnvn Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:55 am

OA should be D

B is wrong because of "it"

C and E are wrong because of "were"
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by jp.jprasanna Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:03 am

That doesn't answer my question...! help !
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by RonPurewal Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:06 am

jp.jprasanna Wrote:If we want to use "lower than" we need 2 countable nouns on both the sides, so are the below correct?

Example : The money that we won last game is lower than that (money) of the previous.
The money that we won is last game is 12£ slightly less than the previous game.


no; "lower" cannot be used with countable things.

in general, i can only think of three types of nouns for which you can use "lower" as a quantifier:

1/ mathematical quantities (things that can be represented by actual numbers)
e.g.
this number is lower than that other number
this percentage is lower than that other percentage (like the example here)
this interest rate is lower than that other interest rate

... so, note that one amount of money can be "lower" than another amount of money.

2/ abstract ideas that aren't necessarily numbers, but that can be thought of as somewhat quantitative (i.e., you can conceptualize the idea of "more" or "less" for these things, even though you can't assign numbers to them)
e.g.
i hold Jim in lower esteem than i hold his brother.
these tasks have lower priority than those other tasks

3/ things that are literally (= physically) lower than other things
e.g.
the elevation of Medellín is lower than that of Bogotá
the ceiling in my new apartment is lower than the one in my old house

under no circumstances can a countable plural noun be "lower" than another countable plural noun, unless you are referring to differences in physical height (e.g., my ceilings are lower than yours -- this means that they are physically closer to the ground, not that there are fewer of them!)


esledge Wrote:So to take things literally how can money do anything? A company can do something about it!


you can use "do" to stand for any action verb.

what you need to realize here is that "action verb" is a very, very inclusive definition -- it's basically any verb at all, other than forms of to be (is, was, will be, etc.) and helping verbs (can, will, etc.)

Example A company took in more overseas projects, so that taxes rose slightly more than they [b]were [/b]last year.


this is wrong. you can't use "were" unless there's another form of "to be" in the other half of the parallelism.

"do" is an action verb -- it's something that employment costs can do: they can go up.

think about the way these kinds of verbs are used in everyday language. it's perfectly normal and universal usage to say "housing prices dropped". notice that this is another action verb.
you seem to be objecting to this usage on the basis that costs/prices don't move all by themselves -- i.e., that some human action is ultimately the trigger of that movement -- but, if language had to be that precise, then it would become difficult or impossible to write just about anything meaningful about anything.
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by resolehtmai Fri Oct 04, 2013 11:01 am

gmater08 Wrote:Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months that ended in September, slightly less than they did in the year that ended in the previous quarter.

(A) less than they did
(B) less than it did
(C) less than they were
(D) lower than
(E) lower than they were

Other than the above choices, which of the following choices are acceptable in this case?
1) lower than they did
2) lower than the rate
3) less than the rate
4) less than the rate was
5) lower than the rate was
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by RonPurewal Mon Oct 07, 2013 7:21 am

None of those is correct.

Among other things, you can't mention a "rate", because no rate is mentioned in the sentence. (You'd have to have an explicit rate, e.g., "2.8% per year".)

Most importantly, do not create your own versions of GMAC's sentences.
Don't do it.

In 99% of cases when students "tweak" GMAC's sentences, their versions are wrong, for reasons that GMAC does not test. (The range of things tested on SC is a very, very small fraction of all issues in English.)
So, we end up with a situation that's like "No, that's wrong, but you don't have to know why."

Your hands should already be full enough with the answer choices that are there!
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by thanghnvn Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:53 am

gmater08 Wrote:Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months that ended in September, slightly less than they did in the year that ended in the previous quarter.

(A) less than they did
(B) less than it did
(C) less than they were
(D) lower than
(E) lower than they were

Is "Employment costs" a countable/uncountable item.

How to select between option "A" and "C"

Thanks


great question typical of gmat.

"lower than in the year..." can be correct if the elipsis make clear the noun in comparision.

I am lower today than in the year you met me.

the elipsis here permit the us of "lower than in the year...". but in choice D, the elipsis dose not work. the preceding clause can not give us an logical elipsis. D is wrong.

whenever we see "than+preposition" , think of the elipsis.

similarly, whenever we see "preosition+preposition" , check whether elipsis works.

as in the test center in Asia, I win gmat in this center

is my thinking correct?
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by RonPurewal Fri Jan 03, 2014 9:14 am

"Ellipsis" (or 'omitting words') is not a good way to think about constructing comparison sentences.

I.e., "ellipsis" suggests that you're starting with some theoretical longer sentence and then "omitting" words from it.
The problem is that, in the vast majority of comparison sentences, that simply isn't what happens.

E.g., In New York, more people walk than drive to work.
This is NOT "ellipsis". There is absolutely NO WAY to write this sentence with more words, unless we fundamentally re-structure the entire thing (for instance, adding "there are" in front of the comparison).

Most comparison sentences do NOT 'omit' anything.

Fortunately, the reality is easier.
Just find what's being compared, and see whether the comparison works.
If you have a comparison signal word (like "less than" or "lower than" here), then whatever follows that word MUST be part of the comparison. Then figure out what the other half of the comparison should look like (to maintain parallelism).
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Re: Employment costs rose 2.8 percent in the 12 months

by manhhiep2509 Sat Jan 25, 2014 5:25 am

Hi Ron.

I choose choice D because I did not realize that the use of "less" and that of "lower" are different.
After reading all the post, I still have confusions about the use of two words and of other similar words.

(1) you said "lower" can use with mathematical quantities. I also see some correct sentence use "greater" with mathematical quantities.

For example:
"5 is greater than 3"

Can "less" be used with mathematical quantities? I always think that "less" and "greater" are opposite.

(2)
You said "the number is lower than other number"
could "greater" or "higher" replace "lower"?

(3)
The sentence says "the costs rose less than ...".
I think "less" describes the changes of the costs in different timeframes.

So, can "lower" and "greater" be used to describe the change as "less" can?

thank you.