Hi,
In the "comparison strategy" chapter, it is mentioned that one needs to keep the comparisons parallel .
My question is related to an example provided in the chapter.
I like to run through forests more than I enjoy walking through crowds.
I understand the correction applied to the incorrect sentence.
However , I understand that parallelism does not mean parallel word to word . We just need to maintain the structure /construction parallel
So , can the above incorrect sentence be corrected as
I like running through forests more than I enjoy walking through crowds.
Is the following considered parallel?
I like running through forests more than I enjoy walking on the ship's deck
verb + noun/gerund+preposition+noun - structure seems parallel