Created in 1731, Anders Celsius’ original thermometer had a scale where the value of 0 corresponded to the boiling point of water; after he died in 1744 the scale was reversed to its present form.
CORRECT B) in 1731, Anders Celsius’ original thermometer had a scale in which the value of 0 corresponded to the boiling point of water; after his death in 1744 the scale was reversed to its present form.
I understand why this answer is correct, however I'm wondering if thermometer doesn't need to be next to its modifying phrase. That's what I initially thought or is it OK just because Anders Celsius’ original further modifies thermometer?
Another way to pur this: I always thought that that was wrong and that the correct answer choice would be something like:
Created in 1731 by Anders Celsius, the thermometer ...
Thanks or your help!