* Awkward Vs Wordy

[sudhanshu.jesthi]

Federal incentives now encourage investing capital in commercial office buildings despite vacancy rates in existing structures that are exceptionally high and no demand for new construction.
(A) investing capital in commercial office buildings despite vacancy rates in existing structures that are exceptionally high and
(B) capital investment in commercial office buildings, even though vacancy rates in existing structures are exceptionally high and there is


OA is B
Doubt: Although "investing capital" in A is awkward, "there is" in B is wordy....How do we priortize which option to choose in this case?

[JonathanSchneider]

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