As a final note, you do not have to make active or passive voice parallel
throughout a sentence. For example:
Right: The shuttle launch TOOK place flawlessly and WAS SEEN on
television.
Both parallel elements work with the subject of the sentence: The shuttle
launch took place and the shuttle launch was seen on television.
But OG13 edition , problem 114
[deleted because problem is from a banned source - see below]
Official explanation mentioned:
If [active voice], then [active voice]
OR:
If [passive voice], then [passive voice]
cannot mix with active + passive in one if... then sentence.
Another example is problem 40 in OG13 edition:
[deleted because problem is from a banned source - see below]
So does this explanation conflict with Manhattan prep guide?