Hi Stacy / Tim ,
I was going through the video answers of your SC answer explanations from the OG.
If you Look at Q. 134 - SC - OG 13
134. Recently implemented...
(A) fatigue among shift workers,
(B)fatigue among shift workers,
(C) and fatigue among shift workers
(D) lowered fatigue among shift
(E) and fatigue among shift workers
I chose Answer A - Because I found 'and have raise production' to be parallel with 'have reduced sickness'.
The below was my reasoning for A and Why can't it be this way:-
'Have reduced sickness, sleeping, fatigue' (3 items parallel)
',and have raised Production ...' ( parallel with the whole clause above- esp because there is a ,and )
I know this is the wrong answer and i am convinced with the actual answer. BUT ,hypothetically, if above were the intended structure, how would it be re-written correctly.
Thanks
Rahul
(Btw- Amazing job - Stacy and Tim . Sentence correction was a weakness for me. After your going through your explanations, it has become my strength)