Errata – Sentence Correction, 6th Edition


Cover for 6th Edition

Release Date:
December 2, 2014

6.0

Page Loc Description Erroneous Text Correction
34 Middle At the end of the 3rd paragraph, the text “Consider this example:” should be removed.
37 Top Solutions, #2: The correct answer is B, not C. The explanation should be as follows: “(B): In the original sentence, the modifier who had been waiting does not clearly modify the people. It appears, illogically, to modify the closer noun (the airport). The boldface version moves who had been waiting next to the people, thus making clear that it is the people who had been waiting.” (C) (B)
58 Bottom The example under preposition is not correctly used as a noun modifier. Sue placed the CAT on the couch. Where is the cat? (on the couch) The CAT on the couch loves dogs. Which cat? (the one on the couch)
85 Top The marker in the second row of the table (Participle Modifiers) is labeled incorrectly. not only X but also Y (closed) X but Y (open)
120 Bottom Explanation for #11. Delete the paragraph starting “The three uses of she”…
153 Bottom Question 4b is labeled incorrectly. It should be labeled WRONG. RIGHT WRONG
173 Bottom In Question 10, “their” should be replaced with “its.” THEIR ITS
175 Middle In Question 10, the text in the parentheses at the end of the sentence should say: “The singular pronoun its signals that the collective noun orchestra is singular in this sentence, so the verb must also be singular.” Like other collective nouns, orchestra is almost always considered singular on the GMAT. The singular pronoun its signals that the collective noun orchestra is singular in this sentence, so the verb must also be singular.
228 Middle The example listed under Wrong would be an acceptable usage under GMAT rules as “estimated at” can be followed by a simple noun. We have therefore updated the examples under Right and changed the example under Wrong WRONG: She ESTIMATES the cost AT ten dollars. RIGHT: With a temperature ESTIMATED AT 100 degrees, boiling water can cause severe burns.
RIGHT: She ESTIMATES the cost TO BE 10% less than it was last year.
WRONG: She ESTIMATES the cost AT 10% less than it was last year.
259 Top The past tense of rise is rose. risen rose