GMAT Sentence Correction: Where do I start? (Part 3)
Welcome to the third part of our series focusing on the First Glance in Sentence Correction. If you haven’t read the previous installments yet, you can start with how to find a starting point on a Sentence Correction problem when the starting point doesn’t leap out at you.
Try out the First Glance on the below problem and see what happens! This is a GMATPrep® problem from the free exams.
* “Most of the purported health benefits of tea comes from antioxidants—compounds also found in beta carotene, vitamin E, and vitamin C that inhibit the formation of plaque along the body’s blood vessels.
“(A) comes from antioxidants—compounds also found in beta carotene, vitamin E, and vitamin C that
“(B) comes from antioxidants—compounds that are also found in beta carotene, vitamin E, and vitamin C, and they
“(C) come from antioxidants—compounds also found in beta carotene, vitamin E, and vitamin C, and
“(D) come from antioxidants—compounds that are also found in beta carotene, vitamin E, and vitamin C and that
“(E) come from antioxidants—compounds also found in beta carotene, vitamin E, and vitamin C, and they”
The First Glance definitely helps on this one: comes vs. come is a singular vs. plural verb split, indicating a subject-verb agreement issue. Now, when you read the original sentence, you know to find the subject.
So what is the subject of the sentence? It’s not the singular tea, though it’s tempting to think so. The subject is actually the word most, which is a SANAM pronoun.
The SANAM pronouns: Some, Any, None, All, More / Most
These pronouns can be singular or plural, depending on the context of the sentence. Consider these examples:
Can you Spot the Meaning Error? (part 3)
Welcome to the final installment in a series of three articles about meaning and sentence structure in sentence correction. Our first one tested meaning and also covered issues related to having to break the sentence into chunks. In the second, we talked about how to use that chunk idea to strip the sentence down to the core structure vs. the modifiers.
Today, I’ve got a third GMATPrep® problem for you following some of these same themes (I’m not going to tell you which ones till after you’ve tried the problem!).
* “Today’s technology allows manufacturers to make small cars more fuel-efficient now than at any time in their production history.
“(A) small cars more fuel-efficient now than at any time in their
“(B) small cars that are more fuel-efficient than they were at any time in their
“(C) small cars that are more fuel-efficient than those at any other time in
“(D) more fuel-efficient small cars than those at any other time in their
“(E) more fuel-efficient small cars now than at any time in”
The first glance doesn’t indicate a lot this time. The answers change from small cars to more (fuel-efficient small cars), which isn’t much of a clue. Go ahead and read the original sentence.
What did you think? When I first read it, I shrugged and thought, “That sounds okay.” If you can’t come up with something to tackle from the first glance or the first read-through, then compare answers (A) and (B), looking for differences.
Hmm. I see—do we need to say that are more fuel-efficient? Maybe. Answer (C) uses that same structure. Oh, hey, answer (C) tosses in the word other! I know what they’re doing!
If you’ve seen the word other tested within a comparison before, you may know, too. If not, get ready to make a note. Take a look at these two sentences: